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*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Romance/Love • Drama
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Looking for gentle, relevant critique. This was meant to be a one-shot that allowed me some practice writing dialogue. Looking for feedback on how well it flowed and the ease of reading, as well as any additional comments on the story. Thank you!

 Rose and Steel Open in new Window. (13+)
The vicious seduction of magic and madness.
#2332170 by Raeanne Lynn Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Dec 20, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Romance/Love • Nature • None
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Hello! I'm just looking for some feedback...happy to exchange for a review of your own item of comparable length. Reviews are auto-rewarded 200 GPs as well.(if I did it right). Thank you!

 Forever If I Have To Open in new Window. (13+)
When it’s true love, you do what you have to 😉😊
#2331614 by elizjohn Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Dec 17, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • Death • None
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Hello! I'm just looking for some feedback...happy to exchange for a review of your own item of comparable length. Reviews are auto-rewarded 200 GPs as well.(if I did it right). Thank you!

 Epitaph Open in new Window. (13+)
Wrote this a while back for the Cramp one day. We were supposed to write about an epitaph.
#2331388 by elizjohn Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Dec 17, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • Mystery • Thriller/Suspense
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Taffane has been dismissed from her Cargo Controller position. She has been thinking about leaving this position for another one. Now, she knows what this position will be. Taffane wants to know what is really happening on their spaceship.

 Finding the Truth Open in new Window. (18+)
Taffane is about to lose her job for something she hasn’t done. So, why is she smiling?
#2331744 by PureSciFi Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Dec 11, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Mystery • Supernatural • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Just read and comment please. All comments appreciated.

 
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Secrets of Denison Creek Open in new Window. (ASR)
Skipping class leads to discovery of a mysterious cabin and Life-changing events.
#2326902 by Prier Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Dec 9, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Crime/Gangster • Dark • Thriller/Suspense
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Got annoyed by the response of my earlier work being "too long", so I wrote a short story. Or I guess a shorter story. More experimental though, made up card game rules. Probably sucks though, even though I like it.

 Game Over Cards Open in new Window. (E)
High-stakes game, where every gamble turns far greater than just the cards over the table.
#2331235 by WriterDudette Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Nov 30, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  None • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I need serious criticism of my prose, form, and the general quality of this story. I wished to create a mysterious modern fantasy based on an Arabic-Islamic gothic setting.

 The Great Old Black Book Open in new Window. (GC)
Ibrahim is a man on a mission in the desert.
#2331099 by The Black Pasha Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Nov 28, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Horror/Scary • Fantasy • Action/Adventure
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Is this really horror? It didn't place in the horror contest it was written for. Any thoughts appreciated!

 
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A Dangerous Gift Open in new Window. (13+)
What do you do when you are a Fire Bearer?
#2325662 by Amethyst Snow Angel Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Nov 22, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Looking for overall reviews! Would love feedback on characters, worldbuilding, and the writing style in particular. Thanks in advance!

 
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The Eyes of the Goddess Open in new Window. (13+)
"The Vessel of the South must burn away and burn anew. Let one fire dim, a new one burn!"
#2330656 by Andrew Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Nov 20, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Personal • Writing • Death
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Seeking honest and constructive feedback.

 November Blues Open in new Window. (E)
What I think and how I feel about this month every year.
#2330262 by Imogen Elliott Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Nov 11, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • Nonsense • None
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Hey, I'm looking for reviews on this short story I wrote after staying up too late. Thank you.

 
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Glerald and the galactic dumpster Open in new Window. (ASR)
Glerald Glert's diary
#2330209 by fayebed Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Nov 9, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Romance/Love • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Honest and helpful feedback please

 Where Life Leads Open in new Window. (18+)
Sample - please give me feedback
#2329210 by Emily Whrights Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Oct 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Dark • Experience • Romance/Love
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
an unfinished novel made up of diary entry of a boy in the 60s as he comes to fall in love with his best friend
and a bunch of sad,dark,and messed up stuff happens

 Abby Lane Open in new Window. (18+)
diary entries from a poorly raised boy as he falls in love
#2328702 by ElytBlank Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Oct 17, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Writing • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Looking for an honest critique.

 A Doctor's Hope for Housing Open in new Window. (E)
A Case-Study
#2328615 by Eloi Serre Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Oct 13, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Drama • Mystery • Romance/Love
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
A complete romance/mystery seeking reviews. There is an Auto-Reward of 1,000 GPs for reviews and comments per chapter (39 plus an epilogue). I always reward more for useful and in-depth reviews. Thanks in advance.

 
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Shadow of the White Woods Open in new Window. (18+)
Exiled to a village in medieval Denmark, Stígandr struggles to right a wrong. (complete)
#2300925 by K Renée Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Oct 1, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Erotica • Romance/Love • Drama
*Penb*  Type:  Preface
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is intended to be a prologue or preface to my novel. I wanted it to have some erotica in the story's theme but more on the romantic side with emotional closeness and involvement.

This moment is supposed to be a highlighted moment between them.

 A Sentimental Affair Open in new Window. (GC)
He is married, She's been through trauma. Holding on by a thread, yet only he can see it.
#2325340 by Barbara Williams Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 24, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Crime/Gangster • Detective • Drama
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Chapter one of a murder case.

 Murder Of A Woman Chapter One Open in new Window. (18+)
A murder case
#2326916 by Sunny Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 14, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Horror/Scary • Occult
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Finally finished. Added section 15 and 16. Scenes aren't in Chrono order, but as I think explains stuff. Love to hear your impressions.

 Fireberry Fever Dreams Open in new Window. (18+)
Everyone is the Chosen; everyone, the villain. Right or wrong, you must decide.
#2295918 by Joto-Kai Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 14, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Western • Crime/Gangster • Action/Adventure
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I am 2 and a half chapters into my train robbery story. I would like other's feedback on dialogue, pacing etc. I haven't been writing for long, this is my first attempt, actually. I have had no training. I just read a ton of action-adventure stories.

 Blaze of Glory. Chapters 1-5 Open in new Window. (18+)
A group of outlaws plan to rob the Union Pacific Railroad. It doesn't go well.
#2311904 by E. Scott Ieppert Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 10, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Community • Contest Entry • Writing.Com
*Penb*  Type:  Non-fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Without Writing.com Life would be impossible. Like a black hole. What if?

 
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The Black Hole Open in new Window. (E)
What if WdC did not exist?
#2326306 by WakeUpAndLive~"HoHoHo" Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 6, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Dark • Horror/Scary • Paranormal
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
hello! i wrote this recently a few months ago after a bout of writer's block, so parts of this may be a tad stilted, but honest reviews will be majorly appreciated! i want to get back into writing more seriously :)

 a haunted house, a picket fence Open in new Window. (18+)
you can run away from home, but you can't run away from who you are.
#2326466 by cherub Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 6, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Mythology • Inspirational • Community
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Please review, will be worth your time!

 Insert title here Open in new Window. (E)
Free your mind
#2105379 by Perhaps Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 3, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Nature • Spiritual • Romance/Love
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
His floral devotion to Mother lives on.

Her crooked smile hung upside down.
Mother couldn't right her happy frown.

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Her Crooked Smile Open in new Window. (E)
His floral devotion to Mother lives on.
#2085712 by ~Brian K Compton~ Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 30, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Anything goes critique! I'm looking to improve my writing style, and I believe this was a good second step to take.

 Aegis 2 - Heist Open in new Window. (E)
Catalina and Mira go on a little heist for Avery.
#2325287 by R.S.V.R Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • Inspirational • Death
*Penb*  Type:  Prose
*Penr*  Request Details:
In a battle-hardened lost colony named Larrikesh, Caleb meets an urban legend on a mission from the Stars.

In the few days he has left, can he help Scarlett learn the lesson she thinks she is sent to teach?

 Never So Alone (c. 11,000 words) Open in new Window. (18+)
As time runs out, a woman out of myth stalks Caleb across the ruined world of Larrikesh.
#2325371 by Joto-Kai Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 20, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Contest Entry • Relationship • Family
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is a entry for a Prompt Contest based on "What If?" Looking for some suggestions and helpful remarks. I made this with a writing style I've been recently using. I don't know if it's any good or if my previous writing style was better.

 Throne of Lies Open in new Window. (ASR)
Contest Entry for 'What If' Prompt
#2325254 by Korosu Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 17, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Writing • Experience • How-To/Advice
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Please be as thorough and honest as you can. I am not afraid of constructive criticism.

 
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The Poet's Challenge Open in new Window. (E)
a challenge to just write
#2325121 by JMariah Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 14, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Biographical • Animal • Satire
*Penb*  Type:  Non-fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Would you mind reviewing my newest item?

 Hot Pursuit.  Open in new Window. (E)
It happened at the library.
#2324904 by ~SilverMoonNoel~ Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 11, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Romance/Love • Action/Adventure • Detective
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
Liam is a new comer to the island , he finds himself in a bind with a missing child case. In the process he finds love that he never could have imagined. This is first try for me at writing romance. I just need an honest review.

 Sun Kissed Love Open in new Window. (18+)
Liam an out of work plant manager moves to the islands finds love and a whole lot more.
#2324229 by Dark Sniper Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 11, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Business • Technology • History
*Penb*  Type:  Other
*Penr*  Request Details:
I want critique on the article I'm trying to write that may be going in a public newsletter. It may be "out of chronological order" already. I labeled this a "private for my eyes only" so if it doesn't appear to you, I will need to change it to what???

 How My Small Business VBCT Began Open in new Window. (E)
Coming full circle to help others regarding the technology world around us.
#2324741 by Vicki Lynne Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 7, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Children's • Family • Emotional
*Penb*  Type:  Novella
*Penr*  Request Details:
I'm looking for someone willing to spare time to give some honest feedback so I can improve this chapter of my novel :)

 Glitch - Chapter 1: Numb Open in new Window. (E)
Luka, struggling after his father's death, receives a message from a hacker "Nightshade"
#2323857 by Kate Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 3, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • Biographical • Experience
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
An emotional piece for me. Rated XGC, and may not be something you would enjoy reading. It offers a small glimpse into my past

 
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Seven Years Open in new Window. (XGC)
My memories had vanished. I recognized faces, voices, but not the bond I held with them.
#2324153 by HaveYourselfAMerryLi'lCharles Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 26, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Action/Adventure • Teen • Supernatural
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Looking for critiques on how I can improve my writing and storytelling.

 Genesis Open in new Window. (E)
Genesis tells the story of Seven individuals, whose collective story will impact the world
#2324098 by ProtoGen Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 24, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Emotional • Entertainment
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Please review my short story and give me some feedback. Thank you so much!

 Core of A Dying Star Open in new Window. (E)
This was my 6th grade fantasy short story.
#2323960 by ElaraFox101 Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 21, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Psychology • Paranormal • Drama
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Jacob extended his arms towards the echoing object, which seemed to be within reach, but he was unable to touch it. His eyes were riveted on his arms, which stretched upwards against the wall. A shiver went down his spine as he noticed how filthy he was.

 
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Tick...Tick... Open in new Window. (18+)
Jacob felt tears forming in the corners of his eyes, not sure what to accept as reality.
#2323231 by HaveYourselfAMerryLi'lCharles Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 12, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Drama • Sports • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is the first 2 chapters of my novel. Looking for any constructive comments good or bad. Thank you

 Run for the Roses (Chapter 1 and 2) Open in new Window. (E)
A girl, a trainer, and a jockey defy all odds to win the Kentucky Derby.
#2321457 by Zeke Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 7, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Biographical • Writing • Experience
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Started writing a memoir about my journey to achieving my dreams. It's still rough and this is only 1 segment of it. I want to flesh it out, put it chronologically, at some point. But as a late night musing...I'm wondering if it's any good.

 Starlight, starbright: Wishes and Dreams Open in new Window. (E)
A memoir of how one girls dream became reality
#2322856 by martiangrl Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 1, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Friendship • Action/Adventure
*Penb*  Type:  Collection
*Penr*  Request Details:
These stories are my first attempt at a fantasy series. I know that they are both long but would love to hear what you think.

Blessings and thank you - Moonie

 
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The Adventures of Alyson Whitecraft Open in new Window. (13+)
Adventures of a young witch, her mother, and her best friend.
#2321701 by MoonChilde Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 1, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Horror/Scary • Dark • Ghost
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
It is said that the old man Hoffman's house is haunted, but Lucas doesn't let that stop him from exploring the place. Looking for opinions on plot, dialogue, flow, mood, and whatever catches your eye enough to make a comment about.

 Lucas Open in new Window. (13+)
The Hoffman house was haunted, they said, but Lucas doesn't believe in that sort of thing
#2321393 by Shawn Odette Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jun 6, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Mystery • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
The first two chapters in an epic fantasy novel. Bit of a slower starter, but I've tried to pack it full of atmosphere and mystery.
Does it still entertain? How immersed and invested were you?

 The Living Fourth: Chapters 1 and 2 Open in new Window. (13+)
A boy with no memory, in a world with no mercy.
#2319667 by Inkly Ascension Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jun 3, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Children's • Family • Friendship
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
The latest draft of my manuscript. It has gone through many revisions and edits based on the great feedback I've received here, as well as from other sources. Did I finally get it right?

Thanks in advance!

Roy

 Nosedive No More Open in new Window. (E)
A young bat has to master the art of landing... Bat Style!
#2225657 by Roy Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 27, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Action/Adventure • Writing.Com
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
I wrote a short story. It has a dragon in it. Let me know how I did. All feedback welcome and super appreciated!

OI! DRAGON! Open in new Window. (E)
A short story about fate... or something. It has a big dragon in it, at least.
#2320689 by L.A.Saxe Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Horror/Scary • Mythology • Adult
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
A scary story. Please review and analyse the storyline and how I can improve it (somehow)?

 
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Jackabus Perfume Open in new Window. (XGC)
A game hunter discovers that some beasts are not to be messed with... WIP
#2269381 by safire_diaz Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Action/Adventure • Comedy • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Draft
*Penr*  Request Details:
I wrote this and I would like some analysis on the humour and the storyline, since it's supposed to be a comedic short I wrote!

 The Supervillain's Cape Open in new Window. (E)
A draft I wrote when I had sudden inspiration
#2277917 by safire_diaz Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Romance/Love • Drama • LGBTQ+
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Super nervous about this! I've wanted to write it for years, but it's such a delicate subject. Does it work within the word count? Is it impactful, respectful, understandable, trite, predictable? Just in time for Pride. Any feedback greatly appreciated.

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Let's Hurt Tonight Open in new Window. (13+)
Don't walk away, don't roll your eyes; if this love is pain...
#2320665 by Amethyst Snow Angel Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Personal • Emotional • Tribute
*Penb*  Type:  Other
*Penr*  Request Details:
I would appreciate it if you reviewed this piece. I was trying to go for an epic that left someone thinking about it for a while afterwards. Hope it's up to standards.

 Life Open in new Window. (E)
A short epic about life.
#2320167 by Monster V. Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 15, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Animal • Children's • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
A fun poem about my love for guinea pigs. Did I get the punctuation right?

 
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My Love For Guinea Pigs  Open in new Window. (E)
My love for guinea pigs know no bounds. (I don't actually own any.)
#2320029 by Elfycia Lee ☮ Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 13, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • Relationship • Dark
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Haven't been on here for a while, coming back with a stream-of-consciousness prose poem. Any reviews appreciated! Thank you

 viking funeral Open in new Window. (18+)
stream-of-consciousness prose poetry about the end of my relationship
#2319174 by Charlie Carrol Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Apr 29, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Other • Opinion • Personal
*Penb*  Type:  Essay
*Penr*  Request Details:
I would love to hear your thoughts on this.

 
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My thoughts on writing Open in new Window. (E)
Simple rumination...
#2305225 by Averren Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Apr 11, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Writing • Other • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Wile E. Coyote fires Acme and files suit

 
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Wile E Coyote and The Roadrunner Open in new Window. (18+)
Wile E, Coyote fires Acme Corporation and Files Law Suit
#2317886 by Chrys O'Shea Author IconMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Apr 11, 2024


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