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*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Drama • History • Romance/Love
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
A complete romance/mystery seeking reviews. There is an Auto-Reward of 1,000 GPs for reviews and comments per chapter (39 plus an epilogue). I always reward more for useful and in-depth reviews. Thanks in advance.

 
BOOK
Shadow of the White Woods  (18+)
Exiled to a village in medieval Denmark, Stígandr struggles to right a wrong. (complete)
#2300925 by de-kayed Renée 🧟‍♀️

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Oct 1, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Erotica • Romance/Love • Drama
*Penb*  Type:  Preface
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is intended to be a prologue or preface to my novel. I wanted it to have some erotica in the story's theme but more on the romantic side with emotional closeness and involvement.

This moment is supposed to be a highlighted moment between them.

 A Sentimental Affair  (GC)
He is married, She's been through trauma. Holding on by a thread, yet only he can see it.
#2325340 by Barbara Williams

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 24, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Crime/Gangster • Detective • Drama
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Chapter one of a murder case.

 Murder Of A Woman Chapter One  (18+)
A murder case
#2326916 by Boo

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 14, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Horror/Scary • Occult
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Finally finished. Added section 15 and 16. Scenes aren't in Chrono order, but as I think explains stuff. Love to hear your impressions.

 Fireberry Fever Dreams  (18+)
Everyone is the Chosen; everyone, the villain. Right or wrong, you must decide.
#2295918 by Joto-Kai

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 14, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • Action/Adventure • Thriller/Suspense
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
These seven planets are under the control of Juanin and Noorva. That leaves three more uninhabited planets in this Group of Planets they want to control. Before they can start populating these planets, there are some problems they must solve first.

 Collecting Resources  (18+)
They have seven planets under their control now. But three of them are having problems.
#2326693 by PureSciFi

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 10, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Western • Crime/Gangster • Action/Adventure
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I am 2 and a half chapters into my train robbery story. I would like other's feedback on dialogue, pacing etc. I haven't been writing for long, this is my first attempt, actually. I have had no training. I just read a ton of action-adventure stories.

 Blaze of Glory. Chapters 1-5  (18+)
A group of outlaws plan to rob the Union Pacific Railroad. It doesn't go well.
#2311904 by E. Scott Ieppert

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 10, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Community • Contest Entry • Writing.Com
*Penb*  Type:  Non-fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Without Writing.com Life would be impossible. Like a black hole. What if?

 
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The Black Hole  (E)
What if WdC did not exist?
#2326306 by WakeUpAndLive️🦇Elf'sSpell

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 6, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Dark • Horror/Scary • Paranormal
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
hello! i wrote this recently a few months ago after a bout of writer's block, so parts of this may be a tad stilted, but honest reviews will be majorly appreciated! i want to get back into writing more seriously :)

 a haunted house, a picket fence  (18+)
you can run away from home, but you can't run away from who you are.
#2326466 by cherub

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 6, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Mythology • Inspirational • Community
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Please review, will be worth your time!

 Insert title here  (E)
Free your mind
#2105379 by Perhaps

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Sep 3, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Nature • Spiritual • Romance/Love
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
His floral devotion to Mother lives on.

Her crooked smile hung upside down.
Mother couldn't right her happy frown.

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Her Crooked Smile by Brian K Compton  (E)
His floral devotion to Mother lives on.
#2085712 by ~BKC~ Re-reading made me sick

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 30, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Anything goes critique! I'm looking to improve my writing style, and I believe this was a good second step to take.

 Aegis 2 - Heist  (E)
Catalina and Mira go on a little heist for Avery.
#2325287 by R.S.V.R

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • Inspirational • Death
*Penb*  Type:  Prose
*Penr*  Request Details:
In a battle-hardened lost colony named Larrikesh, Caleb meets an urban legend on a mission from the Stars.

In the few days he has left, can he help Scarlett learn the lesson she thinks she is sent to teach?

 Never So Alone (10900 words)  (18+)
Time runs out as a woman out of myth stalks Caleb across the ruined world of Larrikesh.
#2325371 by Joto-Kai

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 20, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Contest Entry • Relationship • Family
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is a entry for a Prompt Contest based on "What If?" Looking for some suggestions and helpful remarks. I made this with a writing style I've been recently using. I don't know if it's any good or if my previous writing style was better.

 
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Throne of Lies  (ASR)
Contest Entry for 'What If' Prompt
#2325254 by Korosu

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 17, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Writing • Experience • How-To/Advice
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Please be as thorough and honest as you can. I am not afraid of constructive criticism.

 
STATIC
The Poet's Challenge  (E)
a challenge to just write
#2325121 by JMariah

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 14, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Biographical • Animal • Satire
*Penb*  Type:  Non-fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Would you mind reviewing my newest item?

 Hot Pursuit.   (E)
It happened at the library.
#2324904 by ~SilverMoonBOO!~

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 11, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Romance/Love • Action/Adventure • Detective
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
Liam is a new comer to the island , he finds himself in a bind with a missing child case. In the process he finds love that he never could have imagined. This is first try for me at writing romance. I just need an honest review.

 Sun Kissed Love  (18+)
Liam an out of work plant manager moves to the islands finds love and a whole lot more.
#2324229 by Dark Sniper

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 11, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Business • Technology • History
*Penb*  Type:  Other
*Penr*  Request Details:
I want critique on the article I'm trying to write that may be going in a public newsletter. It may be "out of chronological order" already. I labeled this a "private for my eyes only" so if it doesn't appear to you, I will need to change it to what???

 How My Small Business VBCT Began  (E)
Coming full circle to help others regarding the technology world around us.
#2324741 by Vicki Lynne

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 7, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Children's • Family • Emotional
*Penb*  Type:  Novella
*Penr*  Request Details:
I'm looking for someone willing to spare time to give some honest feedback so I can improve this chapter of my novel :)

 Glitch - Chapter 1: Numb  (E)
Luka, struggling after his father's death, receives a message from a hacker "Nightshade"
#2323857 by Kate

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Aug 3, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • Biographical • Experience
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
An emotional piece for me. Rated XGC, and may not be something you would enjoy reading. It offers a small glimpse into my past

 
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Seven Years  (XGC)
My memories had vanished. I recognized faces, voices, but not the bond I held with them.
#2324153 by Egaeus

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 26, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Action/Adventure • Teen • Supernatural
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Looking for critiques on how I can improve my writing and storytelling.

 Genesis  (E)
Genesis tells the story of Seven individuals, whose collective story will impact the world
#2324098 by ProtoGen

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 24, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Emotional • Entertainment
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Please review my short story and give me some feedback. Thank you so much!

 Core of A Dying Star  (E)
This was my 6th grade fantasy short story.
#2323960 by ElaraFox101

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 21, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Psychology • Paranormal • Drama
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Jacob extended his arms towards the echoing object, which seemed to be within reach, but he was unable to touch it. His eyes were riveted on his arms, which stretched upwards against the wall. A shiver went down his spine as he noticed how filthy he was.

 
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Tick...Tick...  (18+)
Jacob felt tears forming in the corners of his eyes, not sure what to accept as reality.
#2323231 by Egaeus

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 12, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Drama • Sports • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is the first 2 chapters of my novel. Looking for any constructive comments good or bad. Thank you

 Run for the Roses (Chapter 1 and 2)  (E)
A girl, a trainer, and a jockey defy all odds to win the Kentucky Derby.
#2321457 by Zeke

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 7, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Biographical • Writing • Experience
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Started writing a memoir about my journey to achieving my dreams. It's still rough and this is only 1 segment of it. I want to flesh it out, put it chronologically, at some point. But as a late night musing...I'm wondering if it's any good.

 Starlight, starbright: Wishes and Dreams  (E)
A memoir of how one girls dream became reality
#2322856 by martiangrl

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 1, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Friendship • Action/Adventure
*Penb*  Type:  Collection
*Penr*  Request Details:
These stories are my first attempt at a fantasy series. I know that they are both long but would love to hear what you think.

Blessings and thank you - Moonie

 
BOOK
The Adventures of Alyson Whitecraft  (13+)
Adventures of a young witch, her mother, and her best friend.
#2321701 by MoonChilde

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jul 1, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Activity • Writing • Other
*Penb*  Type:  
*Penr*  Request Details:
Paranormal short story. The story is a bit offbeat, so keep an open mind. Thanks. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks.

FOLDER
I write for 2024   (18+)
Keeping all my entries in one place
#2311871 by Nixie🦊 is a WdC Teen!

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jun 16, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Horror/Scary • Dark • Ghost
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
It is said that the old man Hoffman's house is haunted, but Lucas doesn't let that stop him from exploring the place. Looking for opinions on plot, dialogue, flow, mood, and whatever catches your eye enough to make a comment about.

 Lucas  (13+)
The Hoffman house was haunted, they said, but Lucas doesn't believe in that sort of thing
#2321393 by Shawn Odette

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jun 6, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Mystery • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
The first two chapters in an epic fantasy novel. Bit of a slower starter, but I've tried to pack it full of atmosphere and mystery.
Does it still entertain? How immersed and invested were you?

 The Living Fourth: Chapters 1 and 2  (13+)
A boy with no memory, in a world with no mercy.
#2319667 by Inkly Ascension

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Jun 3, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Children's • Family • Friendship
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
The latest draft of my manuscript. It has gone through many revisions and edits based on the great feedback I've received here, as well as from other sources. Did I finally get it right?

Thanks in advance!

Roy

 Nosedive No More  (E)
A young bat has to master the art of landing... Bat Style!
#2225657 by Roy

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 27, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Action/Adventure • Writing.Com
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
I wrote a short story. It has a dragon in it. Let me know how I did. All feedback welcome and super appreciated!

OI! DRAGON!  (E)
A short story about fate... or something. It has a big dragon in it, at least.
#2320689 by L.A.Saxe

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Horror/Scary • Mythology • Adult
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
A scary story. Please review and analyse the storyline and how I can improve it (somehow)?

 
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Jackabus Perfume  (XGC)
A game hunter discovers that some beasts are not to be messed with... WIP
#2269381 by safire_diaz

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Action/Adventure • Comedy • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Draft
*Penr*  Request Details:
I wrote this and I would like some analysis on the humour and the storyline, since it's supposed to be a comedic short I wrote!

 The Supervillain's Cape  (E)
A draft I wrote when I had sudden inspiration
#2277917 by safire_diaz

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Romance/Love • Drama • LGBTQ+
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Super nervous about this! I've wanted to write it for years, but it's such a delicate subject. Does it work within the word count? Is it impactful, respectful, understandable, trite, predictable? Just in time for Pride. Any feedback greatly appreciated.

 
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Let's Hurt Tonight  (13+)
Don't walk away, don't roll your eyes; if this love is pain...
#2320665 by Anarchist Angel 🏴

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Personal • Emotional • Tribute
*Penb*  Type:  Other
*Penr*  Request Details:
I would appreciate it if you reviewed this piece. I was trying to go for an epic that left someone thinking about it for a while afterwards. Hope it's up to standards.

 Life  (E)
A short epic about life.
#2320167 by Monster V.

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 15, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Animal • Children's • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
A fun poem about my love for guinea pigs. Did I get the punctuation right?

 
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My Love For Guinea Pigs   (E)
My love for guinea pigs know no bounds. (I don't actually own any.)
#2320029 by Fearlycia Lee ☮

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: May 13, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • Relationship • Dark
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Haven't been on here for a while, coming back with a stream-of-consciousness prose poem. Any reviews appreciated! Thank you

 viking funeral  (18+)
stream-of-consciousness prose poetry about the end of my relationship
#2319174 by Charlie Carrol

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Apr 29, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Activity • Comedy • Writing
*Penb*  Type:  
*Penr*  Request Details:
Would love to have readers come and add a line to this crazy interactive story idea and see what kind of story we end up with and the fun we have along the way!

 You won the lottery? Now what happens?  (E)
Come have some fun and add a line to help write the rest of this story! Its up to YOU!
#2318616 by AliceLvs2Write

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Apr 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Other • Opinion • Personal
*Penb*  Type:  Essay
*Penr*  Request Details:
I would love to hear your thoughts on this.

 
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My thoughts on writing  (E)
Simple rumination...
#2305225 by Averren

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Apr 11, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Writing • Other • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Wile E. Coyote fires Acme and files suit

 
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Wile E Coyote and The Roadrunner  (18+)
Wile E, Coyote fires Acme Corporation and Files Law Suit
#2317886 by Chrys O'Shea

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Apr 11, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Romance/Love • Philosophy • Emotional
*Penb*  Type:  Article
*Penr*  Request Details:
I mainly write poetry but I would like to see what the people think of my Articles. So here is one about the connection of love in a general sense.

 
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What is love?  (ASR)
I don't think anyone will truly understand it but we know it's there.
#2309151 by Kevster

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Apr 5, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Drama • Family • Relationship
*Penb*  Type:  Serial
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is the first part of a series. Please tell me what I need to improve in terms of plot, character development and description. Please tell me what I need to add or cut out. Also, please tell me what you liked and didn't like. Thank you!

 
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Catfished: Part 1: Christine  (ASR)
This will be a series where the POV characters are the catfish
#2316975 by Leslie Loo

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Apr 3, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • Romance/Love • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Hi there! Just looking for feedback. Happy to exchange a review of your item of comparable length. Thank you!!!

 A Song for No One  (13+)
Only the birds are singing this morning.
#2316725 by elizjohn

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Mar 31, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Community • Cultural • History
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Please review

 Serpent lies...  (E)
How do you begin to explain something so reality shattering?
#2110735 by Perhaps

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Mar 26, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  History • Military • War
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is my first real attempt at poetry. It is based upon the Band of Brothers mini-series. Honest critique appreciated.

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The Legend of Easy Company  (E)
A poem about the storied paratrooper unit from Word War II.
#2316637 by Averren

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Mar 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Supernatural • Mystery • Action/Adventure
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I'm looking for reviews on this short story. Thank you.

 
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Unbridled Showdown  (E)
A mesmerizing circus draws Sofia into an extraordinary world of mystery and magic.
#2315844 by Dee

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Mar 23, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  History • Relationship • Tragedy
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
Ode To Oscar: Chapter 1

 Ode To Oscar: Chapter One, Simplicity.  (E)
A fictionalized memoir of Constance Lloyd-Wilde, wife of Oscar Wilde.
#2314977 by Lilliad

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Feb 27, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Home/Garden • Nature • None
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
A short poem that I wrote about the garden and how it's alive.

 
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As the wind blows through my garden.  (E)
A short poem about the wind.
#2314536 by Llothy54

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Feb 21, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Horror/Scary • Mystery • Paranormal
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
Would love some reviews of my first Horror book.

It is now available on Kindle and Paperback from Amazon. If you have Kindle Unlimited you can get it for free!

http://tinyurl.com/23xtm7dz

Appreciate any time anybody spends reading my work.

Thanks all!

 The Monk (Prologue)  (13+)
Prologue for a horror novel I wrote called The Monk. Full book free on Kindle Unlimited.
#2309275 by jwquinn

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Feb 19, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sports • Romance/Love • Music
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Short story about 2 ice skaters - one is American and one is Russian.

 
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The Cutting Edge  (E)
Who's the best Ice Skater?
#2313648 by SpookyBee

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Feb 8, 2024


*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Drama • Family • Tragedy
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is the finished manuscript of "The Monster Inside The Bottle," I plan on editing it some more before publishing it in the near future, so please read it thoroughly and critique it well.

 (Complete) The Monster Inside The Bottle  (18+)
A son ponders over his father's addiction, a family member's visit and a dark secret.
#2313510 by Artful Flower

*Box*  Not reviewed

posted: Feb 5, 2024


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